Elementary | How Peer Feedback and Next Steps are Impacting Learning in 5th Grade ELA

So one of your strengths that I noticed was that you gave a good restate, a good answer, and I think you also gave two good details to support it. Next time I think you should try to explain your details a little more. So basically, like when you wrote over here, "a final resting place for those who died there" a cemetery is a final resting place for those that died there, and you can--- you could prove your details why it is like, what a cemetery's used for: to honor those who died for our country. Right? So... and I also noticed that you should, maybe you can, you can also do it here "We are met on the great battlefield of that war." You can explain what, right? (and) Why? Like what war? Like, yeah, something like that. So, I think that you should next time try to explain your details a little better. For this you can use- so you could use (this tool) you could prove and explain your details so, this shows as you can see, what this detail means is "This detail proves my answer because_____."You can use it to help you explain why about the detail. This- you can use it to- to show your detail so for example one reason, "For example______". You know what I mean, right? You show the different types of, kinds of details. You restated, you answered and you put a good detail for your answer "sentimental". Like you put "The brave men living and dead who struggled here have hallowed it far above our poor power to add or detract." This shows how many people (died) and the president honored the soldiers who tried to save the union. They died. Yeah and they honored- they honor the- the people and the president honor the soldiers who died and that makes sense, it matches "sentimental". I think you need to work on -- over here you put "This shows how the union are thankful for the soldiers that fought for them." You put "thankful" here but then for your answer you put "sentimental" and "serious" So I think next time you should either change serious (the answer). You should either change your answer or change your detail. But I personally think that you should change "serious" to "thankful" They excel in every area because they learn to get along, they learn to express their thoughts they learn to work in a group, work individually take feedback, and not take it as criticism but really take it as something that's constructive. That just doesn't do anything but T2: Right set them up for success in life. T2: Life skills T1: because they really, Yeah They really do learn to communicate which is the biggest thing. Communicate their thoughts and communicate with others.

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